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Тип 38 № 13593
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38.1.  Imagine that you are doing a project on why IT career is very popular among Zetland teenagers. You have found some data on the subject  — the results of the opinion polls (see the table below).

Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

 

The opinion poll question: why have you chosen an IT career?

Reasons Number of respondents (%)
Good salary33
Many vacancies25
Working from home20
Creative work14
Constant development8

 

Write 200–250 words.

Use the following plan:

—  make an opening statement on the subject of the project;

—  select and report 2–3 facts;

—  make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

—  outline a problem that can arise with some IT jobs and suggest a way of solving it;

—  conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of IT in the modern world.

 

38.2.  Imagine that you are doing a project on what gifts Zetland teenagers would like to receive for their birthdays. You have found some data on the subject the results of the opinion polls (see the pie chart below).

Comment on the data in the pie chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

The opinion poll question: what would you like to receive as a birthday present?

Write 200–250 words.

Use the following plan:

—  make an opening statement on the subject of the project;

—  select and report 2–3 facts;

—  make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

—  outline a problem that can arise with birthday presents and suggest a way of solving it;

—  conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on how to choose birthday presents for your friends.

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По­яс­не­ние.

38.1.  Nowadays IT becomes more and more popular and many people are fond of it. The aim of the project I am currently working on is to find out why IT career is very popular among Zetland teenagers. As part of my project, I have found a table containing some relevant data that I am going to comment on.

According to the data, teenagers in Zetland have quite a wide range of benefits when it comes to choosing IT career. It is clear, that the majority of the respondents consider that working in IT field provides good salary, at 33%. Also, working from home as well as having a kind of creative work seem to be essential for many interviewed (20% and 14% respectively).

It is worth mentioning that the variety of vacancies makes the adolescents think about IT career more than the opportunity to constant development. To my mind, modern teenagers first of all think how to find a job.

However, there are some problems can arise with some IT jobs. For instance, IT programmers usually work from home according to their own schedule. The problem is that they may have sleep problems as they spend a lot of time in front of the screen. One solution to this problem is to use special application that could remind them to go outside and have a rest.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that IT becomes an essential part of modern world. I hope people can learn more improving their logical skills as well as creative ones by being engaged in programming. (260 words)

 

38.2.  Many people believe that birthday is a special holiday for everyone. The aim of the project I am currently working on is to find out what gifts Zetland teenagers would like to receive for their birthdays. As part of my project, I have found and analyzed some relevant data presented in the pie chart.

According to the data, there is quite a wide range of presents teenagers traditionally would like to have. It is clear that a great number of the respondents consider a laptop the best gift (25%). Moreover, headphones as well as a camera also seem to be desired presents among the teenagers (23% and 20% respectively).

Surprisingly, only 8% of the respondents think of receiving a gift certificate as birthday presents. It is three times less popular answer than having a smartphone. To my mind, modern teenagers are interested in electronic devices, so that they always would like to have the latest ones.

One problem that can arise with choosing birthday present is that sometimes people buy the same things. Unfortunately, it happens and it is unpleasant for everybody. One solution to this problem is to use special appliance where a birthday boy can write his wish list and guests can choose present to buy and tick it.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that birthday presents are very important. To choose the best one for my friend I think of his interests. Also, I always try to make a surprise. (243 words)

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Критерии проверки:

Кри­те­рий Кри­те­рии оце­ни­ва­ния от­ве­та на за­да­ние Баллы
K1Ре­ше­ние ком­му­ни­ка­тив­ной за­да­чи

За­да­ние вы­пол­не­но пол­но­стью: со­дер­жа­ние от­ра­жа­ет полно и точно все ас­пек­ты, ука­зан­ные в за­да­нии; сти­ле­вое оформ­ле­ние речи вы­бра­но пра­виль­но (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1 не­пол­ный/⁠не­точ­ный ас­пект и 1 на­ру­ше­ние ней­траль­но­го стиля)

3

За­да­ние вы­пол­не­но в ос­нов­ном: 1 ас­пект не рас­крыт, осталь­ные рас­кры­ты полно

ИЛИ

1 ас­пект не рас­крыт, и 1 рас­крыт не­пол­но/⁠не­точ­но

ИЛИ

2–3 ас­пек­та рас­кры­ты не­пол­но/не­точ­но; сти­ле­вое оформ­ле­ние речи в ос­нов­ном пра­виль­но (до­пус­ка­ют­ся 2–3 на­ру­ше­ния ней­траль­но­го стиля)

2

За­да­ние вы­пол­не­но не пол­но­стью: 1 ас­пект не рас­крыт, и 2–3 рас­кры­ты не­пол­но/⁠не­точ­но

ИЛИ

2 ас­пек­та не рас­кры­ты (осталь­ные рас­кры­ты полно)

ИЛИ

2 ас­пек­та со­дер­жа­ния не рас­кры­ты и 1 рас­крыт не­пол­но/⁠не­точ­но

ИЛИ

4–5 ас­пек­тов рас­кры­ты не­пол­но/не­точ­но; име­ют­ся ошиб­ки в сти­ле­вом оформ­ле­нии речи (до­пус­ка­ют­ся 4 на­ру­ше­ния ней­траль­но­го стиля)

1

За­да­ние не вы­пол­не­но: все слу­чаи, не ука­зан­ные в оце­ни­ва­нии на 1, 2 и 3 балла

ИЛИ

Ответ не со­от­вет­ству­ет тре­бу­е­мо­му объ­е­му

ИЛИ

Более 30% от­ве­та имеет не­про­дук­тив­ный ха­рак­тер (то есть тек­сту­аль­но сов­па­да­ет с опуб­ли­ко­ван­ным ис­точ­ни­ком)

0
K2Ор­га­ни­за­ция тек­ста

Вы­ска­зы­ва­ние ло­гич­но, струк­ту­ра тек­ста со­от­вет­ству­ет пред­ло­жен­но­му плану, текст пра­виль­но раз­де­лен на аб­за­цы, сред­ства ло­ги­че­ской связи ис­поль­зо­ва­ны пра­виль­но

3

Вы­ска­зы­ва­ние ло­гич­но, струк­ту­ра тек­ста со­от­вет­ству­ет пред­ло­жен­но­му плану, текст пра­виль­но раз­де­лен на аб­за­цы, сред­ства ло­ги­че­ской связи ис­поль­зо­ва­ны (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1–⁠3 ошиб­ки)

2

В вы­ска­зы­ва­нии име­ют­ся 4–5 оши­бок в ор­га­ни­за­ции тек­ста

И/ИЛИ

От­сут­ству­ет вступ­ле­ние или за­клю­че­ние

1

В вы­ска­зы­ва­нии име­ют­ся 6 и более оши­бок в ор­га­ни­за­ции тек­ста

И/ИЛИ

От­сут­ству­ет вступ­ле­ние и за­клю­че­ние

И/ИЛИ

Пред­ло­жен­ный план от­ве­та пол­но­стью не со­блю­да­ет­ся

И/ИЛИ

От­сут­ству­ет де­ле­ние на аб­за­цы

0
K3Лек­си­ка

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, прак­ти­че­ски нет на­ру­ше­ний ис­поль­зо­ва­нии лек­си­ки (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1 лек­си­че­ская ошиб­ка)

3

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, од­на­ко име­ют­ся 2–3 лек­си­че­ские ошиб­ки

ИЛИ

Сло­вар­ный запас огра­ни­чен, но лек­си­ка ис­поль­зо­ва­на пра­виль­но

2

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас не впол­не со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, в тек­сте име­ют­ся 4 лек­си­че­ские ошиб­ки

1

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас не со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, в тек­сте име­ют­ся 5 и более лек­си­че­ских оши­бок

0
K4Грам­ма­ти­ка

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, на­ру­ше­ний прак­ти­че­ски нет (до­пус­ка­ют­ся 1–2 не­по­вто­ря­ю­щи­е­ся грам­ма­ти­че­ские ошиб­ки)

3

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, од­на­ко в тек­сте име­ют­ся 3–⁠4 грам­ма­ти­че­ские ошиб­ки

2

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства не впол­не со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, в тек­сте име­ют­ся 5–⁠7 грам­ма­ти­че­ских оши­бок

1

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства не со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, име­ют­ся 8 и более грам­ма­ти­че­ских оши­бок

0
K5Ор­фо­гра­фия и пунк­ту­а­ция

Ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ские ошиб­ки прак­ти­че­ски от­сут­ству­ют. Текст раз­де­лен на пред­ло­же­ния с пра­виль­ным пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ным оформ­ле­ни­ем (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1 ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ская И/ИЛИ 1 пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ная ошиб­ка)

2

В тек­сте име­ют­ся 2–4 ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ские И/ИЛИ пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ные ошиб­ки

1

В тек­сте име­ют­ся 5 и более ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ских И/ИЛИ пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ных оши­бок

0
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Источник: Де­мон­стра­ци­он­ная вер­сия ЕГЭ—2024 по ан­глий­ско­му языку
Раздел кодификатора ФИПИ: 4.6 Опи­са­ние со­бы­тий/фак­тов/яв­ле­ний