Вы­ска­зы­ва­ние долж­но быть ло­гич­но; со­дер­жать всту­пи­тель­ную и за­клю­чи­тель­ную фразы, со­от­вет­ству­ю­щие теме. Сред­ства ло­ги­че­ской связи долж­ны быть ис­поль­зо­ва­ны верно. Не­об­хо­ди­мо из­бе­гать не­обос­но­ван­ных пауз в речи, верно рас­став­лять уда­ре­ния, пра­виль­но ис­поль­зо­вать ин­то­на­цию, не на­ру­шать нормы про­из­но­ше­ния слов.

I was given a task to compare the two pictures. The photos have some similarities  — in both of them we can see people spending time with their kids  — on a day off or during holidays.

At the same time there are quite a few differences. To begin with, picture 1 was taken in winter, while picture 2 was taken in summer. In the first photo we can see several families, while in the second photo  — just one. In picture 2 we can tell that the people are having a good time, whereas in picture 1 it’s difficult to tell whether the parents are having fun, as the weather might be freezing.

As for me, I prefer the second photo as I love summer, the sun, hot weather and holidays by the sea. There are a lot of fun activities in winter as well, such as downhill skiing, but nevertheless I’d rather spend time on the beach.