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Тип 38 № 14319
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38.1.  Imagine that you are doing a project on how teenagers in Zetland spend their summer. You have found some data on the subject  — the results of a survey (see the table below).

Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

 

The survey question:

What is your favourite summer activity?

Summer activityNumber of respondents (%)
Going to the beach35
Swimming in the lake24
Fishing21
Biking11
Hiking9

 

Write 200–250 words.

 

Use the following plan:

  — make an opening statement on the subject of the project;

  — select and report 2–3 facts;

  — make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

  — outline a problem that one can face when planning their free time during the summer and suggest a way of solving it;

  — conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of staying active in the summer.

 

38.2.  Imaginе that you arе doing a projеct on the role of modern technology in the lives of the teenagers in Zetland. You havе found somе data on thе subjеct  — thе rеsults of a survеy (sее thе piе chart bеlow).

Comment on the data in the pie chart and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

The survey question:

What kind of modern technology do you use the most?

 

Write 200–250 words.

 

Use the following plan:

  — make an opening statement on the subject of the project;

  — select and report 2–3 facts;

  — make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;

  — outline a problem that one can face when using modern technology and suggest a way of solving it;

  — conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of using modern technology.

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По­яс­не­ние.

38.1.  Many people believe that summer is the best time for teenagers to engage in outdoor activities. While conducting a project on how teenagers in Zetland spend their summer, I came across a table containing some relevant survey data that I would like to comment on.

According to the data, there is a clear preference for water-related activities among the respondents. The majority of teenagers (35%) enjoy going to the beach, indicating a strong desire for socializing and relaxation in a sunny environment. Additionally, 24% of the respondents prefer swimming in the lake, which suggests that many teens appreciate the refreshing experience of natural water bodies. Fishing, biking, and hiking are also popular, with 21%, 11%, and 9% of respondents respectively, showing a diverse range of interests.

Interestingly, the combined total of 59% for beach and lake swimming highlights the appeal of water activities during the hot summer months. In contrast, biking and hiking, while still enjoyed, attract significantly fewer participants. This disparity may reflect the social nature of beach outings compared to the more solitary experiences of biking and hiking.

One problem that teenagers may face when planning their summer activities is the unpredictability of the weather. Rainy days can disrupt outdoor plans, leading to disappointment. A possible solution to this issue is to create a flexible schedule that includes indoor activities, such as visiting local museums or participating in community events, ensuring that they have alternatives when the weather doesn’t cooperate.

In conclusion, I believe that staying active during the summer is essential for teenagers, as it promotes physical health, social interaction, and mental well-being. Engaging in various activities allows them to make the most of their free time and fosters a sense of community. Therefore, it is important for teens in Zetland to explore different summer activities and remain active throughout the season.(250 words)

 

38.2.  Nowadays, the role of modern technology in the lives of teenagers is increasingly significant. While conducting a project on how Zetland teenagers utilize technology, I came across a pie chart containing some relevant data that I would like to comment on.

According to the data, teenagers in Zetland have a clear preference for certain types of technology. Unsurprisingly, smartphones are the most widely used, with 45% of respondents indicating they use them the most. Following this, 30% of teenagers prefer laptops, while tablets and gaming consoles account for 15% and 10%, respectively. This data highlights the importance of smartphones in daily life, serving as essential tools for communication, social media, and entertainment.

It is worth noting that smartphones are significantly more popular than tablets and gaming consoles combined. This trend suggests that teenagers prioritize devices that offer versatility and convenience. However, the heavy reliance on technology can lead to decreased face-to-face interactions, which is a concern for many parents and educators.

One problem associated with the extensive use of modern technology is the potential for social isolation. Many teenagers may find themselves spending more time on their devices than engaging in real-life social activities. A possible solution to this issue is to encourage designated tech-free times, promoting outdoor activities and in-person gatherings with friends and family.

In conclusion, I believe that modern technology plays a crucial role in the lives of teenagers in Zetland. While it offers numerous benefits for communication and learning, it is essential to use it mindfully to ensure that it enhances social interactions and overall well-being.(262 words)

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K1Ре­ше­ние ком­му­ни­ка­тив­ной за­да­чи

За­да­ние вы­пол­не­но пол­но­стью: со­дер­жа­ние от­ра­жа­ет полно и точно все ас­пек­ты, ука­зан­ные в за­да­нии; сти­ле­вое оформ­ле­ние речи вы­бра­но пра­виль­но (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1 не­пол­ный/не­точ­ный ас­пект и 1 на­ру­ше­ние ней­траль­но­го стиля)

3

За­да­ние вы­пол­не­но в ос­нов­ном: 1 ас­пект не рас­крыт осталь­ные

рас­кры­ты полно),

ИЛИ 1 ас­пект не рас­крыт, и 1 рас­крыт не­пол­но/не­точ­но,

ИЛИ 2–3 ас­пек­та рас­кры­ты не­пол­но/не­точ­но; сти­ле­вое оформ­ле­ние речи в ос­нов­ном пра­виль­но (до­пус­ка­ют­ся 2–3 на­ру­ше­ния ней­траль­но­го стиля)

2

За­да­ние вы­пол­не­но не пол­но­стью: 1 ас­пект не рас­крыт, и 2–3 рас­кры­ты не­пол­но/не­точ­но,

ИЛИ 2 ас­пек­та не рас­кры­ты (осталь­ные рас­кры­ты полно),

ИЛИ 2 ас­пек­та со­дер­жа­ния не рас­кры­ты и 1 рас­крыт не­пол­но/ не­точ­но,

ИЛИ 4–5 ас­пек­тов рас­кры­ты не­пол­но/не­точ­но; име­ют­ся ошиб­ки в сти­ле­вом оформ­ле­нии речи (до­пус­ка­ют­ся 4 на­ру­ше­ния ней­траль­но­го стиля)

1

За­да­ние не вы­пол­не­но: все слу­чаи, не ука­зан­ные в оце­ни­ва­нии на 1, 2 и 3 балла, ИЛИ ответ не со­от­вет­ству­ет тре­бу­е­мо­му объёму,

ИЛИ более 30% от­ве­та имеет не­про­дук­тив­ный ха­рак­тер (т. е. тек­сту­аль­но сов­па­да­ет с опуб­ли­ко­ван­ным ис­точ­ни­ком)

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K2Ор­га­ни­за­ция тек­ста

Вы­ска­зы­ва­ние ло­гич­но, струк­ту­ра тек­ста со­от­вет­ству­ет пред­ло­жен­но­му плану, текст пра­виль­но раз­делён на аб­за­цы сред­ства ло­ги­че­ской связи ис­поль­зо­ва­ны пра­виль­но

3

Вы­ска­зы­ва­ние ло­гич­но, струк­ту­ра тек­ста со­от­вет­ству­ет пред­ло­жен­но­му плану, текст пра­виль­но раз­делён на аб­за­цы, сред­ства ло­ги­че­ской связи ис­поль­зо­ва­ны пра­виль­но (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1–3 ошиб­ки)

2
В вы­ска­зы­ва­нии име­ют­ся 4–5 оши­бок в ор­га­ни­за­ции тек­ста

И/ИЛИ от­сут­ству­ет вступ­ле­ние или за­клю­че­ние

1
В вы­ска­зы­ва­нии име­ют­ся 6 и более оши­бок в ор­га­ни­за­ции тек­ста,

И/ИЛИ от­сут­ству­ет вступ­ле­ние и за­клю­че­ние,

И/ИЛИ пред­ло­жен­ный план от­ве­та пол­но­стью не со­блю­да­ет­ся,

И/ИЛИ от­сут­ству­ет де­ле­ние на аб­за­цы

0
K3Лек­си­ка

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, прак­ти­че­ски нет на­ру­ше­ний ис­поль­зо­ва­нии лек­си­ки (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1 лек­си­че­ская ошиб­ка)

3

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, од­на­ко име­ют­ся 2–3 лек­си­че­ские ошиб­ки,

ИЛИ сло­вар­ный запас огра­ни­чен, но лек­си­ка ис­поль­зо­ва­на пра­виль­но

2

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас не впол­не со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, в тек­сте име­ют­ся 4 лек­си­че­ские ошиб­ки

1

Ис­поль­зу­е­мый сло­вар­ный запас не со­от­вет­ству­ет вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, в тек­сте име­ют­ся 5 и более лек­си­че­ских оши­бок

0
K4Грам­ма­ти­ка

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, на­ру­ше­ний прак­ти­че­ски нет (до­пус­ка­ют­ся 1–2 не­по­вто­ря­ю­щи­е­ся грам­ма­ти­че­ские ошиб­ки)

3

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, од­на­ко в тек­сте име­ют­ся 3–4 грам­ма­ти­че­ские ошиб­ки

2

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства не впол­не со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, в тек­сте име­ют­ся 5–7 грам­ма­ти­че­ских оши­бок

1

Ис­поль­зу­е­мые грам­ма­ти­че­ские сред­ства не со­от­вет­ству­ют вы­со­ко­му уров­ню слож­но­сти за­да­ния, име­ют­ся 8 и более грам­ма­ти­че­ских оши­бок

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K5Ор­фо­гра­фия и пунк­ту­а­ция

Ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ские ошиб­ки прак­ти­че­ски от­сут­ству­ют. Текст раз­делён на пред­ло­же­ния с пра­виль­ным пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ным оформ­ле­ни­ем (до­пус­ка­ет­ся 1 ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ская

И/ИЛИ 1 пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ная ошиб­ка)

2

В тек­сте име­ют­ся 2–4 ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ские

И/ИЛИ пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ные ошиб­ки

1

В тек­сте име­ют­ся 5 и более ор­фо­гра­фи­че­ских

И/ИЛИ пунк­ту­а­ци­он­ных оши­бок

0
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Источник: Стат­Град: Тре­ни­ро­воч­ная ра­бо­та 27.11.2024. Ва­ри­ант АЯ2410101