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Задание 3268
Задание 3269
Задание 3521
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Задание № 3268

Imagine that you are preparing a project with your friend. You have found some interesting material for the presentation and you want to read this text to your friend. You have 1.5 minutes to read the text silently, then be ready to read it out aloud. You will not have more than 1.5 minutes to read it.

 

Because birds have such fine eyesight, they are hard to approach. Bird watchers use binoculars to study birds. One way to watch them up close without using binoculars is to go to a place they go to often. Sit still, keep quiet, and wait until they come. Soon they will be doing things all around you.

You may get too close to the animals you are watching. Always stay at a distance that is easy for them and for you. Do not disturb nesting birds. And never approach an animal that is with its young. Wild animal parents can be very protective. If you come upon a baby animal that looks like it’s alone, let it be. Mother may be watching you from a hiding place nearby.

Do not touch or corner a wild animal. Never follow an animal into places you don’t know. There is no such thing as a tame wild animal.


Пояснение

По­лез­но вна­ча­ле про­чи­тать текст за­да­ния про себя; вы­де­лить труд­ные для про­из­но­ше­ния слова; раз­ме­тить ин­то­на­цию; про­чи­тать текст ше­по­том, а потом вслух, об­ра­щая вни­ма­ние на слит­ность и бег­лость речи.

Читая текст, из­бе­гай­те не­обос­но­ван­ных пауз в речи, верно рас­став­ляй­те уда­ре­ния и пра­виль­но ис­поль­зуй­те ин­то­на­цию, не на­ру­шай­те нормы про­из­но­ше­ния слов.



Кри­те­рии оце­ни­ва­ния вы­пол­не­ния за­да­нияБаллы
Фо­не­ти­че­ская сто­ро­на речи

Речь вос­при­ни­ма­ет­ся легко: не­обос­но­ван­ные паузы от­сут­ству­ют; фра­зо­вое уда­ре­ние и ин­то­на­ци­он­ные кон­ту­ры, про­из­но­ше­ние слов  — без на­ру­ше­ний нормы; до­пус­ка­ет­ся не более 5 фо­не­ти­че­ских оши­бок, в том числе 1–2 ошиб­ки, ис­ка­жа­ю­щие смысл

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Речь вос­при­ни­ма­ет­ся с тру­дом из-⁠за боль­шо­го ко­ли­че­ства не­есте­ствен­ных пауз, за­пи­нок, не­вер­ной рас­ста­нов­ки уда­ре­ний и оши­бок в про­из­но­ше­нии слов

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Сде­ла­но более 5 фо­не­ти­че­ских оши­бок

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Сде­ла­но 3 и более фо­не­ти­че­ские ошиб­ки, ис­ка­жа­ю­щие смысл

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Because birds have such… fines eyesight they are hard to approach. Birds’ watchers are use binoculars to study birds. One way to watch them up// close without using binoculars is to go to a place without go //to often. Still sit... sit still, keep quiet and wait until they come. Soon they’ll be doing thing around you. You may get too close to the animal you are watching. Always stay at a distance that is easier for them and for you. Do not disturb nesting birds and never approach an animal that is with its young. The wild animal parents can be very protective. If you come up… if come upon a baby animals they looks like that it’s alone let it be. Mother may be watching you from a hiding place nearby. Do not touch or corner a wild animal. Never follow an animal into a place you don’t know. There is …there is no… such thing as a tame wild animal.

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Because birds have such fine eyesight they are hard to approach. Bird watchers use binoculars to study birds. One way to watch them|| up close without using binoculars is to go to a place they go too often. Sit still, keep quiet and wait until they come. Soon they’ll be || doing things all around you. You may go… get too close to the animal you are watching. Always stay at || a distance that… is easy for them and for you. Do not disturb nesting birds and never approach the animal that is with its young. Wild animal parents can be very protective. If you come upon a baby animal that looks like it’s alone let it be. Mother may be get be watching you from a hiding place nearby. Do not touch or corner wild animals. Never follow an animal into places you don’t know. There is there is no such a thing as a tame wild animal.

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Задание № 3269

Imagine that you preparing a project with your friend. You have found some interesting material for the presentation and you want to read this text to your friend. You have 1.5 minutes to read the text silently, then be ready to read it out aloud. You will not have more than 1.5 minutes to read it.

 

Some paintings found in different caves around the world are recognized as the work of Stone Age artists. But what was the purpose of the paintings? Why were they hidden in a dark room where there is no evidence that cave people lived?

No one really knows, but there is one theory that makes great sense. It is called the theory of Sympathetic Magic. According to this, the cave people believed that if they could make a likeness of an animal, they could put a spell over it. This spell would give the tribe power over the live animal.

Stone Age existence depended on killing animals  — for food, clothing, and even weapons and tools. The animals were large and fierce; the cave people had only the most simple weapons. Hunters had to be brave and fearless. They needed more than a spear or club; they needed all the magic they could get. The magic could help the hunters catch the animals.

 


Пояснение

По­лез­но вна­ча­ле про­чи­тать текст за­да­ния про себя; вы­де­лить труд­ные для про­из­но­ше­ния слова; раз­ме­тить ин­то­на­цию; про­чи­тать текст ше­по­том, а потом вслух, об­ра­щая вни­ма­ние на слит­ность и бег­лость речи.

Читая текст, из­бе­гай­те не­обос­но­ван­ных пауз в речи, верно рас­став­ляй­те уда­ре­ния и пра­виль­но ис­поль­зуй­те ин­то­на­цию, не на­ру­шай­те нормы про­из­но­ше­ния слов.





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Some paintings found in different caves around the world … are recognized as the work… of stone-age artists. But what’s the purpose… of the paintings? Why were they hidden in the dark room where there is no evidence that сave people lived? No one really knows. But there is one theory that makes great sense. It is called the theory of…. sympathetic magic. According according to this…. theory the cave people believed…. that if they could make a likeness… likeness of an animal they could put a spell over it. This spell would give the tribe power over… the live animal. Stone-age…. existence depended on killing animals for food, clothing and even weapons and tools. The animals were… large and fierce. The cave people had only the most simple…. weapons. Hunters had to be brave and fearless. They needed…. more than a spear or club. They needed…. all the magic they could get. The magic could help…. the hunters catch the animals.

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Some paintings found in different caves around the world are recognized as the work of stone-age artists. But what was the purpose of the paintings? Why were they hidden in а dark room where there is no evidence that сave people lived? No one really knows. But there is one theorу that makes great sense. It is called the theory of sympathetic magic. According to this theory the cave people believed that if they could make a likeness of an animal they could put a spell over it. This spell would give the tribe power over the live animal. Stone-age existence depended on killing animals for food, clothing and even weapons and tools. The animals were large and fierce. The cave people had only the most simple weapons. Hunters had to be brave and fearless. They needed more than a spear or club. They needed all the magic they could get. The magic could help the hunters catch the animals.

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Some paintings found in different caves around the world are recognized as the work of stone-age artists. But what was… the purpose of the paintings? Why were they hidden in а dark room where there is no evidence that сave people lived? No one really knows. But there is one theorу that makes great sense. It is called the theory of sympathetic magic. According to this… theory the cave people believed that if they could make a likeness of an animal they could put a spell over it. This spell would give the tribe power over the… live animal. Stone-age existence depended on killing animals for food, clothing and even weapons and tools. The animals were large and fierce. The cave people had only the most simple weapons. Hunters had to be brave and fearless. They needed more than a spear or club. They needed all the magic they could get. The magic could help the hunters catch the animals.

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Задание № 3521

Imagine that you are preparing a project with your friend. You have found some interesting material for the presentation and you want to read this text to your friend. You have 1.5 minutes to read the text silently, then be ready to read it out aloud. You will not have more than 1.5 minutes to read it.

 

Islands that appear and disappear are certainly part of the world's legends. But in 1963, with the aid of cameras and scientific observers, some of those legends were given a solid basis of fact. For example, on November 13, 1963, a kind of miracle occured. An island was born.

On that day a fishing boat sailed into waters that were boiling and rolling and foul with a strong smell. The world still had a hard time believing the miracle that was to occur. It was the first time that scientists were to witness the unexpected birth of an underwater island.

First the engineer, then the captain, and at last the cook were aware of awful smell and the peculiar roll of the sea. But it was the cook who first noticed the smoke. He thought there was a ship in trouble somewhere on the seas.


Пояснение

По­лез­но вна­ча­ле про­чи­тать текст за­да­ния про себя; вы­де­лить труд­ные для про­из­но­ше­ния слова; раз­ме­тить ин­то­на­цию; про­чи­тать текст ше­по­том, а потом вслух, об­ра­щая вни­ма­ние на слит­ность и бег­лость речи.

Читая текст, из­бе­гай­те не­обос­но­ван­ных пауз в речи, верно рас­став­ляй­те уда­ре­ния и пра­виль­но ис­поль­зуй­те ин­то­на­цию, не на­ру­шай­те нормы про­из­но­ше­ния слов.





При­мер 2.

 

Islands that appear and disappear are certainly part of the world's… legends. But in 1963 with the aid of cameras and ... .scientific... observers some of those legends were given a solid basis of fact. For example, on November 14, 1963 a kind of... . miracle...... occurred. An island was born.

On that day a fishing boat sailed into waters that were... boiling and rolling and... . foul with strong smell. The world... the world still had a hard time believing the miracle that was to... . occur. It was the first time that scientists were to wit... witness the unexpected birth of underwater island. First the engineer, then the captain and at last the cook were... aware... aware of the awful smell and the ... pec... peculiar roll of the sea.

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Задание № 3523

Imagine that you are preparing a project with your friend. You have found some interesting material for the presentation and you want to read this text to your friend. You have 1.5 minutes to read the text silently, then be ready to read it out aloud. You will not have more than 1.5 minutes to read it.

 

Until fairly recently, it was a mystery how certain large bees, bumblebees in particular, were able to fly. To scientists who study the physical laws of flight a bee’s body seemed too heavy and its wings too small for it to become airborne and remain so. Bees "can’t" fly... but do. The mystery became so intriguing that a few scientists decided to study it.

Most insects fly by using muscles that flap their wings with great speed. For example, the locust beats its wings at a rate of about 20 times per second to fly. Other flying insects have to beat their wings even faster  — some as rapidly as 100 times per second.

But bees must work extra hard to become airborne. Honeybees, for instance, must beat their wings about 200 times a second to fly. Yet larger bees  — like bumblebees  — whose bodies are heavier, wider, and longer  — have to do even better.


Пояснение

По­лез­но вна­ча­ле про­чи­тать текст за­да­ния про себя; вы­де­лить труд­ные для про­из­но­ше­ния слова; раз­ме­тить ин­то­на­цию; про­чи­тать текст ше­по­том, а потом вслух, об­ра­щая вни­ма­ние на слит­ность и бег­лость речи.

Читая текст, из­бе­гай­те не­обос­но­ван­ных пауз в речи, верно рас­став­ляй­те уда­ре­ния и пра­виль­но ис­поль­зуй­те ин­то­на­цию, не на­ру­шай­те нормы про­из­но­ше­ния слов.





При­мер 1.

 

Until fairly recently, it was a mystery how certain large bees, bumblebees in particular, were able to fly. To scientists who study the physical laws of flight a bee’s body seemed too heavy and its wings too small for it to become airborne and remain so. Bees “can’t” fly… but do. The mystery became so (не­оправ­дан­ная пауза) intriguing ([In’trIgaIIN]) that a few scientists decided to study it.

Most insects fly by using muscles ([’m0sklz]) that flap their wings ([wInks]) with great speed. For example, the locust ‘beats (не­вер­ное фра­зо­вое уда­ре­ние и пауза после beats) its wings at a rate of about 20 times per second to fly. Other flying in’sects have to beat their wings even faster — some as rapidly as 100 times per second.

But bees must work extra hard to become airborne. Honeybees, for instance, must beat their wings about 200 times a second to fly. Yet larger bees — like bumblebees — whose bodies are heavier, wider, and longer — have to do even better.

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