По­яс­не­ние. In the photo number one, we can see a male hockey team. The game is in high gear. The goalkeeper is protecting his gates. The enemy team’s forwards are very close. In the picture number two, we see another hockey team. It is a female American hockey team. They are standing on the ice and waiting the game to begin.

Both of the pictures show us hockey teams. In both photos there are players on the ice. The difference that immediately stroke into my eyes is that they are of different genders.

There is a widespread opinion that hockey is a men’s sport and women don’t have to play it. As for me, I can say that I’m against this opinion. I’m not a feminist but I think that in sport women should have the same right. I’d like to be a part of women’s hockey team.

Вы­ска­зы­ва­ние долж­но быть ло­гич­но; со­дер­жать всту­пи­тель­ную и за­клю­чи­тель­ную фразы, со­от­вет­ству­ю­щие теме. Сред­ства ло­ги­че­ской связи долж­ны быть ис­поль­зо­ва­ны верно. Не­об­хо­ди­мо из­бе­гать не­обос­но­ван­ных пауз в речи, верно рас­став­лять уда­ре­ния, пра­виль­но ис­поль­зо­вать ин­то­на­цию, не на­ру­шать нормы про­из­но­ше­ния слов.